Eternal Sunset
The wanted poem...
Whatever brings such a beautiful sunset,
also makes the light go away.
The minute before it's all gone,
when you want the sunlight to stay
But how can a sunlight forever be here,
what would become of our earth?
If half of us would live in darkness,
is it the price that it's worth?
Who should decide who gets sun and who don't?
Who gets night or day?
Guess it all depends in the end
on who can afford to pay.
And would we praise the sunset this high
if it stayed like this forever?
If the moon never got to dance
with the stars, all together.
Better have the sun move its own course,
enjoy the minute with concernity.
That is much more beautiful
than a sunset that lasts for eternity.
Hope you liked it, I totally made it up as I wrote it, yet I have to give some credit to Max for coming up with the rhyme for eternity (concernity). Thanks for comments! <3
Whatever brings such a beautiful sunset,
also makes the light go away.
The minute before it's all gone,
when you want the sunlight to stay
But how can a sunlight forever be here,
what would become of our earth?
If half of us would live in darkness,
is it the price that it's worth?
Who should decide who gets sun and who don't?
Who gets night or day?
Guess it all depends in the end
on who can afford to pay.
And would we praise the sunset this high
if it stayed like this forever?
If the moon never got to dance
with the stars, all together.
Better have the sun move its own course,
enjoy the minute with concernity.
That is much more beautiful
than a sunset that lasts for eternity.
Hope you liked it, I totally made it up as I wrote it, yet I have to give some credit to Max for coming up with the rhyme for eternity (concernity). Thanks for comments! <3
Kommentarer
Postat av: Solveig
Wow, lovely poem! I love it. You've worded it so beautifully! It also reminds me of that FB status conversation a few days ago. :P
Postat av: Elsa
OMG! lisa, den va underbar! kan du inte skicka in den till en tävling eller nått? snälla?!?!
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